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Literature For some of you that are fans of literature, you can talk here about books, poetry, and other related things :D

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Old 04-24-2007, 10:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Watch my heart bleed, as tears fall
Silently from these tired eyes
I hate it, and you just turn your face
Cry for these cut feet that lead me nowhere
Just be happy your not me
This body that holds me is too weak
Im too choked up on pretending
I cannot think to speak
Life laughs in my face as it grows more violent
With each scar it creates
Tears no longer heal them
They are cut to the bone
Permanent, so painful, unbearable.
Kiss these tired hands
Relieve these shoulders of weight
SAVE ME
But why would you?
You dont even want to save yourself....
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Old 04-25-2007, 04:43 AM   #2 (permalink)
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So is this supposed to be about mental pain or physical pain?
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Old 04-25-2007, 01:46 PM   #3 (permalink)
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physical pain and maybe just a bit of mental i was just wrighting what was on my mind at the time
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Old 04-27-2007, 04:10 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Well, I can't really get into goth and emo (or even just dark) poetry, so I don't really know how to rate it or what to say. Sorry.
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lol its cool i can show you some of my ligher stuff if you want to see it
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