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03-02-2007, 12:08 AM
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Reality
This reality 'just not working for me
Blood is spilled on the ground While my heart pounds and pounds Darkness consumes the night as i fight for my rights the streets are filled with hate my body aches and aches sweat mixed with blood i can't seem-to- hold my life together my body is carcking in the mirror of reality as apart of me starts to fall i shatter in a pool of blood and my soul consumed in all my dreams keep me sane as i play this awful game reality is not working for me so i'll just dream...and dream.
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Can you hear it? It's the beating of my tail against your leg. 
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03-02-2007, 12:20 AM
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that is....awesome! yay for stuff like that! i say it was great
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03-02-2007, 01:47 AM
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This is good, do you have a deviantart? If you don't you should get on and post your work on there; www.deviantart.com
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03-02-2007, 03:07 AM
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Can you hear it? It's the beating of my tail against your leg.
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03-02-2007, 05:02 AM
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God.
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Watching you, keep up the good work.
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03-02-2007, 12:25 PM
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added to deviant buddy list... or watching list...
 nice work.
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03-02-2007, 12:26 PM
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oh...well that explains who just added me...
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03-02-2007, 06:27 PM
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God.
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Thanks for the fav. :]
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03-02-2007, 09:24 PM
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Undead Lover
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no problem i thought it was good.
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