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My passion for you,
it burns so deep, bright as a thousand suns, warm as a million stars. Beyond the horizon, there I wait for you, warming the cold land, lighting the dark skies, and suddenly I see you, laying there asleep, so fair, so beautiful, so gentle, so pure, so calm, so very serene. I can but only hope, for a single day in time, that she will be mine, and naught but mine alone. As my longing takes over, driving me towards you, I warm you with my touch, my fingers of pure light, they glide over your body, gently touching, caressing, caring for your tender flesh. Oh the possibilities! The many loving acts, all I would do for you, accomplish with you. I can but only hope, for a single day in time, that she will be mine, and naught but mine alone. Your still body begins to stir, eyes beginning to open, revealing the gateway, a gateway to a beautiful mind, a mind so true and unique, I can only smile in its presence. I gaze upon eyes so deep, revealing a beautiful universe, a universe where you and I are, are united and nothing else is, a universe where you and I, we roam through the stars, wandering through the space, alone, together, in sweet harmony. I can but only hope, for a single day in time, that she will be mine, and naught but mine alone. I make my mind firm in action, I will make your beauty mine, never forcefully, but lovingly, tenderly, gently, being me, courting you as none other, showing genuine kindness, caring, love, passion, romance, and when those six words, so strong, so weak, so thoughtful, so meaningful, words I long to hear, words I will wait an eternity to hear, just to come from your mouth, show me such joy and hope, by saying "I love you, I am yours." I can only think of it, for an eternity of time, that she might be mine, and naught but mine alone. --- my boyfriend wrote this for me...OMG i love him!
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aww.
I like guys who can write good poems. :] Apparently there aren't many good ones where I live. >> It was very nice!! [:
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i know...i cried when i read it! a guy has never felt that way towards me before.
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I know guys who have, but they never wrote about it. ><
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lol...he's something else...not like my last bf...you know...we have been going out for like a mouth and a week. but so far he has bought me three gifts for no reason.
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Aww. Well, I hope you guys have a "Good Relationship" unlike mines. ^-^;
He's good at poems, just like you! =O
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thanks and i hope you find soemone that will care for you and just be there.
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It was a great poem. Though, just to warn you, most relationships where the guy showers a girl with gifts and love non-stop.....it usually doesn't work out.
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i'll keep that in mind but i think he's a really nice guy.
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That's really...ummm....wow....words cannot express what I think of this poem. My God. It's that amazing. I think it shall inspire me to do something. *slaps what I wrote onto my sig*
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