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Lovly girl
lovly apple of my eye
tell me now before i die i'm i the one that you so seek? if so thenthen i love thy --- comments?
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01-05-2007, 12:03 PM
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Nice rhyme, but it seems to be lacking principal.
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01-08-2007, 01:52 AM
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yeah...i know...i just came up with it...my sis could do better.
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01-08-2007, 02:16 AM
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Heh. One of those poems you just made up in a few minutes?
That's what my ~Le Tresor Interdit~ poem started out, but I put some time and work into it and it turned into what it is today. 
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01-08-2007, 02:20 AM
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yeah...i noticed
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01-08-2007, 02:22 AM
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So it just takes time and use a dictionary and thesaurus and a rhyming dictionary and stuff like that.
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01-08-2007, 09:40 AM
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It was a nice poem even if it had no principle
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