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01-05-2007, 04:55 AM
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Sweet viper snake
you tore me open
like a newly found present the sharp words cut me deep like a knife tell me now, are you proud?! you riped out my heart just to prove a point you killed my soul when i thought you were ture do you think you've killed me? do you think i've die? not yet my sweet viper snake... im not going to lie down not until .... you've died ---- comments?
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01-05-2007, 05:01 AM
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Wow. That was great. ^_^
I LOVE THE ENDING TO YOUR POEM. I'd say the same thing to every retard who destroyed me. TT__TT Again, very nice indeed Mistrust. :]
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01-05-2007, 05:15 AM
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oh me too. i would be like,"you son of a bleep....dont think you've seen the last of me...im going to kill you!" yeah but that would be creep and i would go to jall.
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01-05-2007, 09:10 AM
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Nice poem man
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I don't usually like dark poems, but I like the ending to yours.
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01-08-2007, 02:00 AM
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well, im a dark person...but dont think i wear black and eyeliner! im normal...i dress normal...and i have long hair.
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01-08-2007, 02:03 AM
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I wear black eye liner! =O
I still like your dark poem. You should make more of'em. :]
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01-08-2007, 02:07 AM
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lol...well i do have this one peom i really like.
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So make a new thread about it then.
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