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Old 12-23-2006, 11:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Just something i came up with.

Love me for my misery,
for this is where i'll always be,
Love me for my misery,
so we can be,
Love me for my misery,
this is where we will be.

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Old 12-24-2006, 12:26 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Seems a bit too repetitive. Maybe you could use different words for 'misery'.
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Old 12-24-2006, 01:11 AM   #3 (permalink)
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yeah but you have to remeber it's my first one and i worte it in like two minutes
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Old 12-24-2006, 02:56 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Yeah. That's why I'm making suggestions for it. To help you out.
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Old 12-24-2006, 03:06 AM   #5 (permalink)
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oh ok thank you then
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Old 12-24-2006, 05:47 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Mmhm. That's kinda the whole point of putting it on here. :XD:
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Old 12-24-2006, 05:36 PM   #7 (permalink)
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*sighs* you have a good point
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it not bad man but ya need more word u are good at it tho
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Old 12-24-2006, 06:48 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I think he's saying that it's too short, but it's still good.
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Old 12-24-2006, 07:17 PM   #10 (permalink)
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