Beyond the Blue.....

[Yoherz]

Beyond the blue,
No one ever dies, no broken hearts, no hungry eyes.
Streets paved with gold, frightening winds don't blow.

Beyond the blue, we all have a home.
No one's left to grow old alone,
No fear of the night, no doubt what's right.
Beyond the blue.....

[chocobox25]

you are a good poet

[Yoherz]

Thank you. Can you be more specific about which parts you like and don't like?

[chocobox25]

ok my favorite part is this one: Beyond the blue,
No one ever dies, no broken hearts, no hungry eyes.

but i dont like (or understand) this one: Streets paved with gold, frightening winds don't blow.

is that what you meant?

[Yoherz]

"Streets paved with gold" is an old saying. It's something that your grandparents would say when they were young. Off-hand, I can't remember exactly what it means, but from what I remember it means that there is plenty of food, water, and wealth going around that you could pave the streets themselves with gold and still have plenty more than enough left over. :biggrin:

[chocobox25]

oh...ok it makes more since now

[Yoherz]

Yeah. I asked and it's supposed to mean like.....everything is good and people and the economy are doing so well that the streets could be paved with gold.

[Rini]

Originally Posted by chocobox25

ok my favorite part is this one: Beyond the blue,
No one ever dies, no broken hearts, no hungry eyes.

I really like that part too. ^________^ You are a really good poet Yoherz. :]

[Yoherz]

Thank you.
Any lines you think I can improve upon?

[Rini]

Nope. I think you're doing awesome. Well, better then me that is... ><;;