Another.....

[Yoherz]

Another set of blades lain down.
Another pair of guns put away.
Another flame put out, never to burn again.
Another wave of hate, calmed to equality.
Another stone ground down to the sand.
Another fist lowered to raise arms for a hug.

Another way of bringing peace to the world.

All to be kept safe, never to bring anyone into harms way.

Not another pain.

All because of love.

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Comments? ::

[chocobox25]

it was good...did you write it?

[Yoherz]

Yup. I was actually inspiried by you two to start writing it. :biggrin: Though, it was my wife that gave me the inspiration for those verses. :smile:

[chocobox25]

by us to start writing it why?

[Yoherz]

Because you two reminded me of the younger love my wife and I had when we were still just boyfriend and girlfriend.

[chocobox25]

oh well that makes since

[Yoherz]

Mmhm. Any comments on certain lines or anything? Anyone?

[Mistrust]

yeah i got something.....about the peom...it refferes to a pain that was so horrible that it itself caused pain for others but before it grew too out of control...a love was brought into this and it was that love, the cooling waters, that brought such pain to it's knees and made it disappear. right?

[Yoherz]

Wow. That's exactly it. I couldn't have said it better myself. Incredible description there. o_o

[Mistrust]

thanks...i have a feeling for this stuff...i guess it's cause im a artist...speaking of that...can you put in a fan art thread?