Invisible

[Lewelynikki]

This is a poem i wrote today, which i'm trying to turn into a song, i hope you guys like it

Invisible:

Yesterday it felt so apathic
you weren't even looking at me
and when you did,
it felt like you never knew me
why can't erase you off my mind?
why do you still get the worst out of me?
i'd give anything to start again
i'd give anything to be rebornt


[Chorus]
I Feel so invisible
i feel so unnecessary
if this is what i wanted
why can't i stand it?
i can't give you more than me
but i know i can give you me whole
still i know it's the wrong thing to do
and i can never redeem me

why do i even try?
if i fail and fall all over again
it's like a big storm
which won't let me get through
and once i'm through with the pain
you are not there anymore

I Feel so invisible
i feel so unnecessary
if this is what i wanted
why can't i stand it?
i can't give you more than me
but i know i can give you me whole
still i know it's the wrong thing to do
and i can never redeem me

do you like seeing me like this?
do you enjoy making me suffer?
was i made to entertain thee?
was i bornt to be someone else's pleader?
get me out of this place!
rescue me from this unstoppable rain!

I Feel so invisible
i feel so unnecessary
if this is what i wanted
why can't i stand it?
i can't give you more than me
but i know i can give you me whole
still i know it's the wrong thing to do
and i can never redeem me

i cried and cried
til i went dry
i waited and waited
til i got rotten
i begged and begged
til my last breath
i gave you all of me
and it seems it was a fatal mistake
who will bring up the pieces?
of my broken and spit heart
so now a new road i must take
i must leave it all behind
won't forget all i tried
won't forget all i broke

I Feel so invisible
i feel so unnecessary
if this is what i wanted
why can't i stand it?
i can't give you more than me
but i know i can give you me whole
still i know it's the wrong thing to do
and i can never redeem me


Yeah, i know it's emotional(don't dare call it emo) and well, as it seems, it's not a very good point of my life...

[Yoherz]

Might sound better in Spanish, but it's got some typos in your English version there. lol.

And it is emo.....but I guess I can call it, "depressing" instead?

[Nykocide]

could you type in again in spanish please? I think it would sound better that way. And yes it is Emo-tional. But spanish Emo might be the new thing. Don't forget to copyright it.