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05-28-2007, 04:51 AM
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The chains that hold me tight
Are heavy and strong I stuggle and fight Yet they never let go Will i ever be freed? Will the chains of depression kill me in the end? My eyes slowly close I think it's time for the end of the road But when i think it's time to go I hear a voice a loving and caring voice It calls out to me "hang on. don't let go" it says yet i feel the cold sneeking up my spine and into my soul It squeezs me tight leaving me on death's door but then i feel a warm arm holding me close it pulls me away from the bottom and stripps me of my chains My eyes never open Yet it feels so familar I can breath again I can see my way Can not pined To the ground with heavy wieghs I see my hero Warm as the sun itself He pulled me from my depression and save me from myself Who is this hero? Who might he be? Anyone that being me delight and fills my life full of glee.
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05-28-2007, 04:55 AM
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great one...it made me cry...thats the first poem the make me cry...
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05-28-2007, 04:57 AM
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well, that's new. i wanted to do a love peom next but i'm stumped with the words. hehehe. i guess i'm nott really in a loving mood.
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05-28-2007, 05:01 AM
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well you write in the mood your in...you know? its supposed to come naturally...dont force it like i do...
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05-28-2007, 05:13 AM
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yeah. that's right. when i want to write a poem of love is only when i feel loved or love someone.
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05-28-2007, 05:25 AM
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yeah but no one loves me and if they do they don't show it and just pick on me like little boys that odn't know how to show there damn feelings!
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05-28-2007, 05:38 AM
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stupid boys. some boys just make me so mad! if ya like me then damnit tell em!
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05-28-2007, 03:49 PM
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lol well i guess that could be the case but most people are too scared of what will happen afterwards or too scared of geting hurt again as for me if i like somone i will tell them but i allways get the yeah right like i give a s**t from them so im still looking lmao but it wont put me off trying but some people arnt like that they need the other person to make the first move
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