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tears over flow
like a boat full of holes i start to sink into the depths of the sea there is nothing keeping me up but something weighing me down it's heavier than 23 tons i stuggle to breathe yet i can't seem to reach the air of life that i need to surive i'm dying slowly as i sink No one can ever think of the possible things the things that kill a person the things that make them die Yet i know one that can end a life the prue sadness ranging inside
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05-28-2007, 04:35 AM
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its getting harder and harder to read your poems....the depression in them..is killing me slowly inside...the little bit of joy and happieness i have left...is getting destroied...but its good that it does that, a good poem can change peoples emotions
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05-28-2007, 04:39 AM
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forgive me that i'm making you sad. i'm just a little hurt inside about what happened to an important person.
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05-28-2007, 04:44 AM
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its ok, a good poet changes other people emotions to their own...i can feel your pain in your poems...but i cant understand it...it shows that it is truely a great poem
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thank you. it's nice to know. i'm feeling a bit better now. only a bit. i'm sure by tomorrow i'll feel better.
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yes yes. i like to. oh look at that it's tomorrow.
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oh really? i hate time zones.
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yeah i do too, they should just all have the same time
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not where i am...i still got another 45 minutes
