why can't i let you go?

[Mistrust]

oh, why can't i let you go?
my heart swells but then dies some more
it hurts to see you with another girl
it hurts to see you at all

i've lost the world

Why can't i let you go?
Please just get away
It hurts to much to say your name
Oh why can't i let you go?

the person i once loved
stole my heart
and made my dreams come ture
but then you left for a prettier girl

now all i feel is sorrow

You came and left just as fast
as my heart broke
You hurt me
you killed me

i think that's no joke

Why did i ever think
that you were the one?
why did i ever think
i could spend my life with you?

Now i can't seem to look at another guy
fearful that i would die some more
maybe even preish in his arms.

Is there no one?
that can understand this pain?
to be used like a rag doll throw in the rain?

Why did i ever see you
as my only one?
Why did i ever even met you!?

it hurts to much to think of the good times
it hurts to much to see that girl of yours
so i'll go away

and kill the pain
before it eats me away
BOdy and soul
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comments are welcomed!

[chocobox25]

*heart beats slower with eyes open wide* good...and i think that my only comment.................

[Mistrust]

do u really like it?

[Gondor Reficul]

I think that.

I mean...there's a lot of emotion put into that...I can feel it. It hurts to read it...

Sorry, my mind sorta stopped there...dunno why, but I'll add to this later.

[chocobox25]

mhm i think its great, but it seems a little...sad, but i still think its great ya know?

[Mistrust]

well my peomtary is making people sad. that's a new one.

[sasuke]

yeah its good and yep that sure is your syle of poem and your good at it good job on the poem its like i allways say

Be yourself
the people
who mind
dont matter
and the
people who
matter dont mind