Durg

[Mistrust]

we say taking durgs is worng and kills
but what you don't know all durgs don't come in a form
of a pill, dust, or liquid

most people are hooked on this durg already
when they don't even know it.
they think it's fun and clouds the eyes
some people worry for their safely

we many not know it but the durg is not very far
it's in your home, it's in public places, it's even in your school
when you don't even know it you get addicted
you never know and only way you do is when you're told

the people that stay on for hours a night
they are stuck, they are hooked on this durg
me, myself has been taken over by it
it's feels good to know that it's here all the time

but in a flash it can be gone
with knowing that your mind wethers
and you search for it again and again

you save your money just to get it
you grow fat and detact from the world
you want to know what this durg that is speading like a virus?

you're on it right now
typing away.
yes, that's it.
it's the computer frying your brain

[chocobox25]

thats a good poem

[Mistrust]

thanks a lot man.

[sasuke]

yeah very interesting nice work

[Yoherz]

Yup. Internet addiction.
I thought you were gonna go with that love was the drug.

Oh, and you might wanna spell check the poem. ;

[Mistrust]

i know i got drug wrong. i didn't notice it until i finished it. sorry. i have that metal disease that make everything look backwards.

[Yoherz]

mental*

I think it's called dislexia. I never understood why they made it so long for people that can't write anyways.

[Mistrust]

i know but i'm getting over it and learning to be a good writer. i feel so good to know that i can get pass my limits and become what people never thought of me!

[Yoherz]

Yup. That's something I've noticed. If someone can't hear, they can become great musicians (like Bethoveen [sp?]) and so forth. People can overcome their weaknesses and turn them into strengths.

[Mistrust]

yep. i made my greatest weakness into a strength. I'm so glad you can understand!